Thanks to Jess F. for sending this in.
Showing posts with label eww. Show all posts
Showing posts with label eww. Show all posts
September 16, 2011
February 22, 2011
September 15, 2009
A prime example of the energy-zapping passive voice
In an average week, TV is being watched by about 43 million in this audience and radio is being listened to by 37 million.
Nooooooooooes!
Let's recast that and put some oomph back in:
In an average week, about 43 million in this audience watch TV, and about 37 million listen to radio.
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On a related note, OMG, I'm sorry for never posting anymore. I really want to try harder, as I continue to see "good" examples of terrible offenses daily.
Nooooooooooes!
Let's recast that and put some oomph back in:
In an average week, about 43 million in this audience watch TV, and about 37 million listen to radio.
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On a related note, OMG, I'm sorry for never posting anymore. I really want to try harder, as I continue to see "good" examples of terrible offenses daily.
June 26, 2009
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