Showing posts with label headline headaches. Show all posts
Showing posts with label headline headaches. Show all posts

February 5, 2008

December 10, 2007

Come on, CNN!

Over the weekend, CNN had these hed busts on its homepage for more than six hours. I see this sort of thing from them all the time!

Copy editors asleep at the wheel, or no copy editors? Which would be worse ... hmm ... I can't decide.

November 20, 2007

Things that bug me about the NYT

• The excessive use of prepositional phrases at the beginning of heds:

• Awkward 'Is Dead' construction in obit heds. It's just ... harsh:

• Really egregious errors in pieces about my favorite band after The Beatles that clearly were not fact-checked. I know concert reviews are on super-tight deadlines, but c'mon, people*:

*That was for Alex.

October 10, 2007

When good specs go bad

Kids, this is what happens when waaaaay there's too much emphasis on filling out a headline for the sake of everything lining up just so:

Egads. Issue seen as key one? Blech! This smacks of "your story is too short, so I'm gonna need to put an extra dek on that hed" to me. I also don't like "seen as," because it begs the question "by whom?" and doesn't answer it.

Let's rewrite this. Ideas?